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One of the controversial issues today relates to pandemics. The reason is that it is not exaggerated to say that everything is changed because of covid-19. Among them, one of the biggest effects is a related job. During the pandemic, almost all restaurants do only take out or deliver. For me, I also have the same situation. This means I need less time to work. It makes me
chill. However, every situation has a two-sided aspect. That is I can’t get tips from customers. In Canada, Tips take up a big part in making money.
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One of the controversial issues today relates to pandemics.
>>> One of the controversial issues today is related to the pandemic.
The reason is that it is not exaggerated to say that everything is changed because of covid-19.
>>> CORRECT!
Among them, one of the biggest effects is a related job.
>>> One of the biggest effects among them is related jobs.
During the pandemic, almost all restaurants do only take out or deliver.
>>> During the pandemic, almost all restaurants are only taking out or deliver.
For me, I also have the same situation.
>>> CORRECT!
This means I need less time to work.
>>> CORRECT!
It makes me chill.
>>> CORRECT!
However, every situation has a two-sided aspect.
>>> CORRECT!
That is I can’t get tips from customers.
>>> CORRECT!
In Canada, tips take up a big part in making money.
>>> CORRECT!
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