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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Composition:
Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy - computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.
In my opinion, It is better for the students to buy lots of books.
Nowadays, the students already have their own personal computers in each house. They don't need more computers but how to use well.
The students use their computers so much time. But most time is used to play game, to search meaningless gassip by them. Anyway, the problem is not lack of computers but the way to use computers.
Of course, buying books for them could be good thing. But more important thing is to manage reading books. Just buying and arranging them is useless.
The teacher should check what kinds of books they read, how they feel to reading, how often they read..etc.
강사 첨삭
Well I have to completely agree with you Doris. Children now a days simply misuse the convenience they have by having computers. Back in my days, I have to do all my researching by books and there is an entirely unexplainable experience I get from reading books. It kind of makes me feel more intelligent hehe. Anyway, good opinion on your homework. Keep it up!
T. Aurora
Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library.
Which should your school choose to buy - computers or books? Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation.In my opinion, It is better for the students to buy lots of books.
>>In my opinion, it is better for the library to buy lots of books.Nowadays, the students already have their own personal computers in each house.
>>Now a days, students already have their own personal computers in their house.
They don\'t need more computers but how to use well.
>>They don\'t need more computers. They just need to learn how to use it well.The students use their computers so much time.
>>Students spend so much time using computers.
But most time is used to play game, to search meaningless gassip by them.
>>But most of the time they use it to play games and to search more meaningless gossips.
Anyway, the problem is not lack of computers but the way to use computers.
>>Anyway, the problem is not the lack of computers but the way computers are used.Of course, buying books for them could be good thing.
>>Correct!
But more important thing is to manage reading books.
>>Correct!
Just buying and arranging them is useless.
>>Correct!The teacher should check what kinds of books they read, how they feel to reading, how often they read..etc.
>>Teachers should check what kind of books they read, how they feel after reading, how often they read etc.
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