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1) This is a nice cat. It's much nicer than my friend's cat. 2) Here's Emily. She's six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is older.3) This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk is the most difficult exercise on the worksheet. 4) He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the most interesting hobby in the world. 5) In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even better one last weekend.
Just simple writing.
Today i met my friend who is going to travel to europe with me. We should decide many things about travel such as making reservation for hostel, checking landmarks, searching good restaurants. One of our problems is the language. She can't speak English at all. Plus, she knows my major (English edu) and my job. So she seems not to worry about it. Because she believes I can speak English so fluently even though she has never listened to my English speaking.
This situation would be strong motivation to study speaking with Aurora^^
강사 첨삭
Amazing! You were able to answer all the sentences correctly. You trully are an exeptional English teacher. Well I\'m glad you found a motivation to study English. I guess it\'s nerve wrecking and challenging at the same time. But I don\'t agree when you said that you can\'t speak English at all. I think that you can do it very very well. So just stay positive all the time. You can do it Doris! ^^
1) This is a nice cat. It\'s much nicer than my friend\'s cat.
>>Correct!
2) Here\'s Emily. She\'s six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is older.
>>Correct!
3) This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk is the most difficult exercise on the worksheet.
>>Correct!
4) He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the most interesting hobby in the world.
>>Correct!
5) In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even better one last weekend.
>>Correct!Just simple writing.
>>Just a simple writing.Today i met my friend who is going to travel to europe with me.
>>Today I met my friend whos is going to travel to Europe with me.
We should decide many things about travel such as making reservation for hostel, checking landmarks, searching good restaurants.
>>We should decide on many things about the trip such as making reservations for hostels, checking land marks and searching for good restaurants.
One of our problems is the language.
>>Correct!
She can\'t speak English at all.
>>Correct!
Plus, she knows my major (English edu) and my job.
>>Correct!
So she seems not to worry about it.
>>Correct!
Because she believes I can speak English so fluently even though she has never listened to my English speaking.
>>Because she believes I can speak English so fluently even though she has never heard me speak English.This situation would be strong motivation to study speaking with Aurora^^
>>This situation would be a strong motivation for me to study speaking with you more.
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