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2012-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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1. Appalling 2. Regulate 3. Reconcile There was a girl. She didn't go university, because her family was poor. Although her has a skill on repairing car, her salary is so appalling that she is not reconciled to her job. Moreover, her company regulates the promotion apportunities which the lowly- educated and the women employees get. So she decided to go university for geting out of her appalling-educated status and the company which has a conservative regulation. The classes in the university are reconciled to her. She is very happy to know many things. The Learning doesn't regulate any situation, just need the passion for learning...... Hi Aurora~ The above is not real story ^^ Sorry for late. It is yesterday's hw. see you^^

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HI! Thank you for sending me your composition and you did a great job! Keep it up! I thought it was a real story. ^_^ If you have any questions with your homework feel free to ask me during our classes. I hope you had a great day! See you tomorrow =) T.Aurora 1. Appalling 2. Regulate 3. Reconcile There was a girl. >>Correct She didn\'t go university, because her family was poor. >>She didn\'t go to the university becasue her family is poor. Although her has a skill on repairing car, her salary is so appalling that she is not reconciled to her job. >>Although she has skills on repairing cars, her salary is not that good and she needs to reconcile with her job. Moreover, her company regulates the promotion apportunities which the lowly- educated and the women employees get. >>Moreover, her company regulates the promotion opportunities which the low educated people and even women employees gets.So she decided to go university for geting out of her appalling-educated status and the company which has a conservative regulation. >>So she decided to go to the university inorder for her to get out of her appalling educated status and the company who has a conservative environment.The classes in the university are reconciled to her. >>The classes in teh university are reconciled for her. She is very happy to know many things. >>Correct The Learning doesn\'t regulate any situation, just need the passion for learning......>>Learning doesn\'t regulate situations, it just needs the passion for learning.Hi Aurora~ The above is not real story ^^ >>Hi Aurora, The above story is not realSorry for late. It is yesterday\'s hw. >>Sorry for the late composition. It should be submitted yesterday.see you^^ >>Correct

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