HW!
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I think the someone who knowing a delayed gratification is more mature. Because this people are more patient and can control their impulses more than others.
2. Gadgets make our life comfortable. I am using an iPhone mini and now that I think about it, it is so amazing that how this small device can do many things. I can store many information and this holds a lot of photos of my precious memories. From now on the smartphone comes to a point where even children must have.
3. I have really poor sense of direction. If I go into a building and come out, I have no idea which direction I came in. It is the most amazing thing in the world that people remember the road they only have been there once.
Good morning, Faith! It\'s too bad I can\'t take today\'s class ;( I hope you have a good weekend❤️
강사 첨삭
You exceeded my expectation, Erin! You even told me stories using the expressions! I feel sad not to have a class with you today, but it must be important, so I understand! Take care! See you next week!-Faith-
1. I think the someone who knowing a delayed gratification is more mature. Because this people are more patient and can control their impulses more than others.>> 1. I think that someone who knows a delayed gratification is more mature because he is more patient and can control his impulses more than others.
2. Gadgets make our life comfortable.
>> CORRECT
I am using an iPhone mini and now that I think about it, it is so amazing that how this small device can do many things.
>> I am using an iPhone mini and now that I think about it, it is so amazing how this small device can do many things.
I can store many information and this holds a lot of photos of my precious memories.
>> I can store much information and this holds a lot of photos of my precious memories.
From now on the smartphone comes to a point where even children must have.
>> From now on, smartphones come to the point where even children must have.
3. I have really poor sense of direction.
3. I have really poor sense of direction.
>> 3. I have really a poor sense of direction.
If I go into a building and come out, I have no idea which direction I came in.
>> If I go into a building and come out of it later, I have no idea anymore which direction I came in.
It is the most amazing thing in the world that people remember the road they only have been there once.
>> It is the most amazing thing in the world that some people remember the road they only have taken once.
Good morning, Faith!
>> It is the most amazing thing in the world that some people remember the road they only have taken once.
Good morning, Faith!
>> CORRECT
It\'s too bad I can\'t take today\'s class
>> It\'s too bad I can\'t take today\'s class.
;( I hope you have a good weekend❤️
>> I hope you have a good weekend.
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