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Ages ago, I sold an used item on an app.
I met an women in person.
Before we met, she had told me that she want me to give some fruits.
At first, I thought that is she trying to cut prices?
Later when I met, it just a favor.
She gave me a hug and said nice things.
I sincerely thought that she is so adorable and warm.
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Good evening, Erin!
(^__^)
Thank you so much for this composition. I have made some modifications for you to review later on.
People are becoming less motivated to purchase used goods as a result of the introduction of mass, low-cost manufacture.
Regardless, the market for thrifty items holds strong.
I will talk to you again tomorrow. Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
Ages ago, I sold an used item on an app.
I met an women in person.
I met an women in person.
>>> A long time ago, I sold a used item on an app. I met the female buyer in person.
>>> OR: I once sold a secondhand item through an app. The female buyer and I spoke in person.
Before we met, she had told me that she want me to give some fruits.>>> She had requested that I give her some fruits when we first met.
At first, I thought that is she trying to cut prices?
Later when I met, it just a favor.
At first, I thought that is she trying to cut prices?
Later when I met, it just a favor.
>>> At first, I believed she was trying to lower prices. It was merely a favor when we later met.
She gave me a hug and said nice things.
She gave me a hug and said nice things.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: She hugged me and complimented me.
I sincerely thought that she is so adorable and warm.
I sincerely thought that she is so adorable and warm.
>>> I sincerely thought that she was so adorable and warm.
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