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2012-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Linda: I'd like to speak with Larry Smith, please. Operator: Would you like to leave a message? Linda: I wanted to check to make sure he remembered our meeting tomorrow. Operator: If you leave your name and number, I'll ask him to call you back when he gets in. Linda: Certainly, my name is Linda Strait. Aurora, I changed the word, laugh to happy ^^ And Thank you so much for your detailed explaination^^ Have you ever been happy just a little while because of misunderstanding? One day, I met my bofriend. He brought something which was used to protecting from some germ. At that time, the strong influenza was spreading. When I saw the bottle, I was so happy because I thought he wanted me not to take influenza. After I seeing it, I said "wow, thank you" But he said that "Oh I am sorry, My grandma gave it to me." Actually, I was disappointed, but I was intended to be ok. This is the situation that I was happy because of misunderstanding.

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Good job on your homework. You actually answered all of it correctly! Talk to you later   T. Aurora   Linda: I\'d like to speak with Larry Smith, please. >>Correct!Operator: Would you like to leave a message? >>Correct!Linda: I wanted to check to make sure he remembered our meeting tomorrow. >>Correct!Operator: If you leave your name and number, I\'ll ask him to call you back when he gets in. >>Correct!Linda: Certainly, my name is Linda Strait.Aurora, I changed the word, laugh to happy ^^ And Thank you so much for your detailed explaination^^>>Aurora, I changed the word laugh to happy ^^ and thank you so much for your detailed explanationHave you ever been happy just a little while because of misunderstanding? >>Have you ever been happy just for a little while because of a misunderstanding?One day, I met my bofriend. >>One day, I met up with my boyfriend. He brought something which was used to protecting from some germ. >>He brought something which is used to protect you from germs. At that time, the strong influenza was spreading. >>Correct! When I saw the bottle, I was so happy because I thought he wanted me not to take influenza. >>When I saw the bottle, I was so happy because I thought he wanted me not to have incluenza.After I seeing it, I said \"wow, thank you\" But he said that \"Oh I am sorry, My grandma gave it to me.\" Actually, I was disappointed, but I was intended to be ok. >>After seeing it, I said, \"Wow, thank you.\" but he said \"Oh I\'m sorry, my grandma gave it to me.\" Actually, I was disappointed, but I was ok.This is the situation that I was happy because of misunderstanding. >>This is the situation when I was happy because of a misunderstanding.

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