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2012-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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A purpose of complaint is to change some unsatisfied situations to better ones. If the situation will not have changed even though I complain something, I do not appeal it. A complaint that can't change a situation is just to make feel down or to be angry. It is useless thing. But when I want to change the situation, I need to appeal it exactly once. So to complain in person is more effective way than in writing. After complaining in person. Maybe I know that a responsible person tries to satisfy my requirment. However the situation is not change for a long time or I am not sure whether the work is working or not, I can use the way to write an email in detail. The important thing on this, I need to tell him that I really know his effort for me. I should express very thankful feeling and then I tell my main intention to him. All the process is working by the person. So to be angry him can make the work more slowly or difficultly.

강사 첨삭

  Hi. GOOD JOB. I enjoyed reading your composition. Thank you for doin it. See you tomorrow. T. Aurora A purpose of complaint is to change some unsatisfied situations to better ones. >>The purpose of complaint is to change some unsatisfied situations to better ones. If the situation will not have changed even though I complain something, I do not appeal it. >>If the situation will not have change even though I complain something, I do not appeal it. A complaint that can\'t change a situation is just to make feel down or to be angry. >>A complaint that can\'t change a situation is just to make others feel down or to be angry. It is useless thing. >>It is a useless thing. But when I want to change the situation, I need to appeal it exactly once. >>But when I want to change the situation, I need to appeal it exactly at once. So to complain in person is more effective way than in writing. >>Correct. After complaining in person. >>Correct. >>After complaining personally. Maybe I know that a responsible person tries to satisfy my requirment. >>Correct. However the situation is not change for a long time or I am not sure whether the work is working or not, I can use the way to write an email in detail. >>Correct. The important thing on this, I need to tell him that I really know his effort for me. >>Correct. I should express very thankful feeling and then I tell my main intention to him. >>I should express my gratitude and then I will tell my main intention to him. All the process is working by the person. >>Correct. So to be angry him can make the work more slowly or difficultly. >>So to get mad at him it can make the work slower or more difficult.

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