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What a cute story, Andrew! It was nice to know two of the wishes you made, especially the last one about the TV. (❁´◡`❁) I agree that it\'s extremely fun to watch TV shows, but be careful about watching for a long period of time because you might hurt your eyes. ^^
~T.Harmony <3
>> I saw falling stars today.
(NOTE: In English, we usually place \"today, tomorrow, yesterday\" at the end of our sentence. ^^)
I made a wish.
>> CORRECT!
It was a lived forever.
>> It was to live forever.
I hope that can be real and I have another wish.
>> CORRECT!
It is um... always watch TV!
>> CORRECT!
OR>> It is to always watch TV!
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