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강사 첨삭
This is a wholesome story, Andrew! (^・ω・^ ) You not only spent time with your grandparents, but you also found a lost dog. I hope you try to look for its owner, but if not, I guess you can keep it. :D
~T.Harmony <3
>> I went to my grandparents\' house today.
Grandparents said we were going to park.
>> They said we were going to the park. (NOTE: You can use \"they\" to replace your grandparents since the readers already know that you\'re talking about them because you mentioned them in your first sentence. ^^)
So we went to park.
>> So we went to the park.
At the park I saw a dog that don\'t have owner.
>> At the park, I saw a dog that didn\'t have an owner.
So I picked up and took the dog.
>> So I picked it up and took the dog.
I was very happy.
>> CORRECT!
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