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학생이 쓴 원문
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강사 첨삭
Congratulations Lucas! This was an amazing story! It was very funny and I enjoyed reading your short story very much! Here are my corrections:
1. King have a big castle but king have no sun.
>> The king has a big castle but he has no son.
2. King are sad.
>> The kind was sad.
3. He couldn\'t merry because king was ugly.
>> He couldn\'t marry anyone because he was ugly.
4. One day he saw ugly girl.
>> One day, he saw an ugly girl.
5. He said \"can I merry\" ugly girl said \"yes!!!\" king was very happy.
>> He asked the girl if he could marry her, and the girl agreed, he was very happy.
6. King get a prince and princess!!! but they were ugly too.
>> The king and the girl had a prince and a princess, but they were ugly too.
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