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Another funny story from you, Andrew! (*^▽^*) I think it\'s very silly for the prince to get mad and cry because he decided to dress himself up as a dragon in the first place. If you take a closer look at my corrections, some of them are me adding \"the\" before prince, and you actually wrote it correctly near the end. :) Remember that as long as you\'re not using someone\'s name, you must add \"the\", which is what you did with the king as well. (Example: the daughter, the witch, and the knight)
~T.Harmony <3
>> CORRECT!
One day that was halloween.
>> One day, it was Halloween.
Prince want to do trick or treat.
>> The prince wanted to do a trick or treat.
So prince dress up as a dragon.
>> So the prince dressed up as a dragon.
The prince do treat trick or treat to some house.
>> The prince did a trick or treat to some house.
First house owner said \"hello kid??\"
>> CORRECT!
Prince was angry because the owner said \'kid\'
>> The prince was angry because the owner said \'kid\'.
OR>> The prince was angry because the owner called him a kid.
He shouted to the owner and run to castle.
>> He shouted to the owner and ran to the castle.
The king said what is your name?
>> CORRECT!
OR>> The king asked, \"What is your name?\"
Because the prince dressed up as dragon.
>> Because the prince dressed up as a dragon.
Prince cried.
>> The prince cried.
The end!
>> CORRECT!
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