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That\'s a cool dream, Andrew! Not only did you see a rainbow-colored star, but you flew and caught it too! It was a good story overall, especially for kids. Thank you!
~T.Harmony <3
>> In my dream, I saw a rainbow-colored star.
So I jump.
>> So I jumped.
Then I flew the sky I don\'t no why these happen.
>> Then I flew to the sky. I don\'t know why it happened. (Please take note of the spelling of \"know\", and it is suggested that you separate them into two sentences by adding a period in between. ^^)
But I caught a star.
>> CORRECT!
I was very happy.
>> CORRECT!
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