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:0 That sounds like a cool magic trick! From picture to reality! I hope I can watch a magic trick like that someday. ^^ Nice story, Andrew!
~T.Harmony <3
>> I watched a magic show today. (In American English, we usually write \"Today, Tomorrow, Yesterday\" at the end of the sentence. ^^)
First, the magician do the magic.
>> The magician started with a magic trick.
There was a picture.
>> CORRECT!
I was bird and the magician kick the picture and there was a real bird!
>> I was a bird, and after the magician kicked the picture, there was a real bird!
It was very excited!
>> It was very exciting!
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