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Write something about what most Koreans enjoy most about the spring season.
In Korea, Spring begins in March. March is warm but still a little cold.
So inside activities are more popular than outside ones.
In University, specially freshmen, they try to have a meeting with many girls.
In Korea, sometimes, a meeting is not just a gathering but the time when some men and women who don't know each other meet for the first time. If they have strong mind to someone, maybe they can go out together,if not, they can hang out together just one day.
In April, it is becoming warmer and warmer. many small events relating blooming flowers are here and there. So, lots of couples and groups go to see flowers. especially, to send one's parents there is a kind of good thing to their parents.
anythings else are to go hiking mountain with coworkers and to hold athletic meeting at schools or on companies.
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Hello! Thank you for doing your homework. The things you write about spring makes me feel sorry that we don\'t have spring in my country.Your description creates a picture in my mind. It sounds like a really fantastic season. Here are my corrections for you to review.
T. Aurora
Write something about what most Koreans enjoy most about the spring season.In Korea, Spring begins in March.
>> correct
March is warm but still a little cold.
>> correctSo inside activities are more popular than outside ones.
>> So indoor activities are more popular than outdoor ones.In University, specially freshmen, they try to have a meeting with many girls.
>> correct
>>In University, specially among freshmen, guys try to meet alot of girls.In Korea, sometimes, a meeting is not just a gathering but the time when some men and women who don\'t know each other meet for the first time.
>>correct
If they have strong mind to someone, maybe they can go out together,if not, they can hang out together just one day.
>> If they like each other, maybe they can go out together. If not, they can hangout for just a day.In April, it is becoming warmer and warmer. many small events relating blooming flowers are here and there.
>>In April, it becomes warmer and warmer, many small events related to blooming flowers are here and there.
So, lots of couples and groups go to see flowers.
>> correct
especially, to send one\'s parents there is a kind of good thing to their parents.
>> Sending one\'s parents flowers is considered a special thing for parents.
>> To invite one\'s parents to go and see one of these is a special thing for parents.anythings else are to go hiking mountain with coworkers and to hold athletic meeting at schools or on companies.
>> Other activities include going mountain hiking with co-workers and holding athletic meetings at schools or at companies.
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