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2012-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Write about what you understand from the saying "Action is the real measure of intelligence." First of all, I totally agree with this sentence. Of course action can not show everything, but to show visible thing is very important to make believe someone or something. When i worked at an academy, there was a boy who doesn't have any interested in studying at all. One day, he told me that he can study well if he has just a little intension. It means that the reason he is not good at studying is not his dull intelligence but just a lack of intension. When i heard of it, I told him that it is perfectly wrong and big misunderstand about your ablity. Action is a kind of intelligence, To be able to effort is also too, i think. Having a smart brain or many knowledges, if I don't use them or don't have any effort of it, It is the same to nothing.

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Hello! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about this. Great job! Have a good night! ~Teacher Aurora~ Write about what you understand from the saying \"Action is the real measure of intelligence.\">> correctFirst of all, I totally agree with this sentence. >> correct Of course action can not show everything, but to show visible thing is very important to make believe someone or something. >> Of course action cannot show everything, but to show something visible is very important to make someone believe something. When i worked at an academy, there was a boy who doesn\'t have any interested in studying at all. >> When I worked in an academy, there was a boy who doesn\'t have any interest in studying at all. One day, he told me that he can study well if he has just a little intension. >> correct OR >> One day, he told me that he will be able to study well if only he can get a little motivation. It means that the reason he is not good at studying is not his dull intelligence but just a lack of intension. >> It means that the reason he is not good at studying is not because he is not intelligent. It was just a lack of motivation.When i heard of it, I told him that it is perfectly wrong and big misunderstand about your ablity. >> When I heard that, I told him that it is totally wrong and it is a big misunderstanding. OR >> When I heard that, I told him that it is totally wrong and it is not a good way to think about your ability. Action is a kind of intelligence, To be able to effort is also too, i think. >> I think action, with effort, is a kind of intelligence too. Having a smart brain or many knowledges, if I don\'t use them or don\'t have any effort of it, It is the same to nothing. >> Being smart or having a broad knowledge is useless if I don\'t make an effort of using them properly.

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