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-Since I’m applying for not the development or QA part in gaming industry, I just changed the questions into my part-business part of the gaming industry. It is because I don’t know much about the game development process, but if there is any way to answer your question, please tell me in the class! Thx
Q. What do you think the future of gaming industry would be? Make a prediction of the market outlook
During the COVID period, the explosive growth trend of the gaming industry has slowed down with the onset of the endemic, making it difficult to anticipate a positive outlook for the gaming industry. However, with the relaxation of game regulations in China in 2023 and the successive release of Triple-A grade games, there are some positive signals to consider. In the case of the Korean gaming industry, which has been predominantly focused on mobile and RPG genres, recent attempts at diversification of genres and platforms have been noticeable.
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Hello, Eugene!
I understand. Thanks for clarifying that part. Let\'s have your suggested question instead. :)
With regards to your response, it provides a thorough analysis of the current state and trends in the gaming industry, showcasing your understanding of the challenges and opportunities. To enhance it further, consider briefly mentioning how your skills and experiences align with these trends, your positive outlook on the industry\'s future, and your ability to adapt and contribute effectively to innovative initiatives. This will create a more impactful and concise paragraph for a job interview setting.
~ Teacher Maxine
During the COVID period, the explosive growth trend of the gaming industry has slowed down with the onset of the endemic, making it difficult to anticipate a positive outlook for the gaming industry.
>> During the COVID period, the explosive growth trend of the gaming industry slowed down with the onset of the pandemic, making it difficult to anticipate a positive outlook.
However, with the relaxation of game regulations in China in 2023 and the successive release of Triple-A grade games, there are some positive signals to consider.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> With the easing of game regulations in China in 2023 and the consecutive launch of Triple-A grade games, there are encouraging signs to take into account.
In the case of the Korean gaming industry, which has been predominantly focused on mobile and RPG genres, recent attempts at diversification of genres and platforms have been noticeable.
>> In the case of the Korean gaming industry, which has predominantly focused on mobile and RPG genres, recent attempts at diversification of genres and platforms have been noticeable.
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