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2024-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Maxine

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One of my proudest achievements is expanding the genres of content on the platform. To prevent genre stagnation and expand revenue and user base, I utilized existing sales data. Alongside this data, with evidence showing that 80% of our platform users are women by 2030, I strategically chose the romance-fantasy genre. I actively searched and contacted studios specializing in producing such content, conducting numerous meetings. I also actively promoted the platform\'s advantages to procure previously untapped contents, negotiating contract terms to diversify our selection of romance-fantasy titles. As a result, I achieved a six-fold increase in its share within the platform and securing approximately 49,000 additional transactions, leading to over 200% revenue growth. I consider this experience as a pinnacle achievement, demonstrating proactive leadership in proposing and executing business strategies to deliver exceptional results.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Eugene!
Well done! Your achievement is clearly outlined with statistics, ensuring the interviewer grasps its effectiveness. Keep up the great work!
~ Teacher Maxine

One of my proudest achievements is expanding the genres of content on the platform. 
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To prevent genre stagnation and expand revenue and user base, I utilized existing sales data. 
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OR >> Utilizing existing sales data, I prevented genre stagnation and expanded both revenue and the user base.

Alongside this data, with evidence showing that 80% of our platform users are women by 2030, I strategically chose the romance-fantasy genre. 
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OR >> In light of data indicating that 80% of our platform users will be women by 2030, I strategically opted for the romance-fantasy genre.

I actively searched and contacted studios specializing in producing such content, conducting numerous meetings. 
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I also actively promoted the platform\'s advantages to procure previously untapped contents, negotiating contract terms to diversify our selection of romance-fantasy titles. 
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As a result, I achieved a six-fold increase in its share within the platform and securing approximately 49,000 additional transactions, leading to over 200% revenue growth. 
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OR >> This initiative resulted in a six-fold increase in its platform share and secured approximately 49,000 additional transactions, leading to over 200% revenue growth.

I consider this experience as a pinnacle achievement, demonstrating proactive leadership in proposing and executing business strategies to deliver exceptional results.
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