HW
학생이 쓴 원문
[ESSAY]
In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Do you like meeting new people?
No, I don’t like meeting new people.
Because I think I’m an introvert person.
So when I meet strangers, I’m shy.
It is very difficult to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Rachel!
Here\'s your corrected essay. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions, such as combining your first two sentences. Have a good evening there!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Do you like meeting new people?
No, I don’t like meeting new people.
Because I think I’m an introvert person.
>> No, I don’t like meeting new people because I think I’m an introvert.
So when I meet strangers, I’m shy.
>> OR: That\'s why I feel self-conscious and reserved when I meet new faces.
It is very difficult to me.
>> This is a troublesome and awkward situation for me.
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