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Gwangbokjul is the important day for our country. Many ancestors strugled to take back our a soveriegn. When they were fighting to Japan, most of them were sacrifised. Thanks to them , we independented from Japan. Since that time we commemorate Gwangbokjul and express our appreciation every year. Then talk to you afternoon~

Hi there, Iris!

Thank you again for making your homework. I think your ancestors  deserve the commemoration you are doing annually for their hard work way back 1950's. They really are heroes. Anyway, have a great day ahead. See you!

-Louise-                             

Gwangbokjul is the important day for our country.

>> Gwangbokjul is an important day for our country.

Many ancestors strugled to take back our a soveriegn.

>> Many of our ancestors struggled to take back our a soveriegnty.

When they were fighting to Japan, most of them were sacrifised.

>> A lot of them sacrificed their lives as they battled with Japanese army.

Thanks to them , we independented from Japan.

>> Thanks to them, we became independent, and Japanese colonization finally ended.

 Since that time we commemorate Gwangbokjul and express our appreciation every year.

>> Since that time, we commemorate Gwangbokjul and express our appreciation every year.

 Then talk to you afternoon~

>>I'll talk to you this afternoon!