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2012-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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"Friendship is the most important relationship. Do you agree? Why? Why not?" - > Of course friendship is important. Friends share joys and sorrws with me. Also,they help me so. I am happy. but not mostimportant relationship.I think important relationship is husband and wife furthermore,family relationship. They always stands by their parther. They have to be together because they live together. I think this relationship is connected more than friendship. Alice, How can i study English writing and How to memorize English words easily ? My big weakness are both :(

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Hello. ^^, You can actually form simple sentences in English correctly. You just have to polish your writing skills by reading more English literary pieces. This will certainly answer both your problems in writing and in broadening your vocabulary. The more you read, the more you will be acquainted with more English words. As much as possible, use every new word in your everyday life for you to be able to put it in mind. You can do it! I do believe in you. You have to believe in yourself that you can do it too. Take care. _T.Alice   Question: \"Friendship is the most important relationship. Do you agree? Why? Why not?\" - > Of course friendship is important. >> Correct. >> OR, For me, friendship is absolutely important. Friends share joys and sorrws with me. >> Friends share joys and sorrows with each other. >> My friends share their joys and sorrows with me.Also,they help me so. I am happy. >> Also, they help me so I am happy. [punctuation marks]but not mostimportant relationship. >> But it is not the most important relationship among all the existing relationships. I think important relationship is husband and wife furthermore,family relationship. >> I think, the relationship between a husband and a wife called a family relationship is the most important relationship there is. They always stands by their parther. >> They always stand by each other. They have to be together because they live together. >> Correct.  I think this relationship is connected more than friendship.>> I think this relationship is more connected than that of friendship. >> I think this relationship is more committed than that of friendship.Alice, How can i study English writing and How to memorize English words easily ?My big weakness are both :( >> Alice, how am I going to learn how to write in English and how can I memorize more English words easily? These are both my weaknesses.

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