HW
학생이 쓴 원문
Let's practice your writing skill. Please read and understand the quote and tell me your thoughts about it.
****"It is easier to forgive an enemy than to forgive a friend."*** William Blake
This wise saying warns our to take care for close people whom we are easier to rude. Someone like fmaily and old friend
People tend to reveal his real-personality when he stay in confortable and familiar space or with such person. That qualification most of them have is so bad to others. Why is that?
I think the reason is also on our common-real-personality. We want to be looked great, praised, and better than others. So we take a mask to want to feel it. But Its' so incomfortable because it is not realface. So we are tired to keep trying. So in a moment we forgive, we become to forgive close people like friend although we already know they are real precious treasure. Because our inborn is self-centered.
강사 첨삭
Wow! I love your interpretation, Steve. I was to touched while reading it. It\'s good that you are really have a very good understanding with the saying. I think so too that we often see our friends, when they commit mistakes, it is a bit difficult for us to forgive them when compared to a stranger who commits mistakes to us. We do not know them much and we will not feel that betrayed, right? Thank you for your homework. I really appreciate it! See you in class!
Sincerely,
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Here are my corrections for you:
This wise saying warns our to take care for close people whom we are easier to rude.
>>>The wise man is trying to warn his readers to take care of their relationship with people who are close to them.
Someone like fmaily and old friend>>>Maybe someone from the family or an old friend.People tend to reveal his real-personality when he stay in confortable and familiar space or with such person.
>>>People tend to show or reveal their real personality when they remain comfortable and familiar with a person.
That qualification most of them have is so bad to others. Why is that?>>>Their attitude that they are showing are bad for others. Why do I think so? I think the reason is also on our common-real-personality.
>>>I think the reason is that, there is something to do with our common personality which are real.
We want to be looked great, praised, and better than others.
>>>Correct!
>>>We want others to look us up, to praise us. We want to be better than them.
So we take a mask to want to feel it.
>>>Sowe can even mask our real personality just to feel it.
But Its\' so incomfortable because it is not realface.
>>>But it\'s not comfortable because that\'s not your real personality.
So we are tired to keep trying.
>>>So we are often tired to keep trying.
So in a moment we forgive, we become to forgive close people like friend although we already know they are real precious treasure.
>>>So from that moment, we forgive the people close to us. It is harder to forgive closer friends although we already knew that we treasure them.
Because our inborn is self-centered.
>>>Because it is in-born for human the attitude of being self-centered.
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