HW-2
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What do you think will happen to each country if the restrictions will still continue for the whole year? What long-term effects will it give?
A. I think that a effect of regulation will be diminished. Because many people feel tired from regulation. Also, some industries have been affected by Covid19, these industries continue to suffer losses and will be limited. Thus, government will do to ease regulations.
In the long-term, I think Covid19 has greatly affected the generalization of working from home and it will lead to change in people\'s lifestyle. In my case, I sometimes working from home and it improves my quality of life ( I can never say this to my boss^^).
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Q. What do you think will happen to each country if the restrictions will still continue for the whole year? What long-term effects will it give?
A. I think that a effect of regulation will be diminished. Because many people feel tired from regulation.
>>> I think the effect of the regulations will be diminished because many people already feel tired from them.
Also, some industries have been affected by Covid19, these industries continue to suffer losses and will be limited.
>>> CORRECT
Thus, government will do to ease regulations.
>>> Thus, the government should at least do something to ease the regulations.
In the long-term, I think Covid19 has greatly affected the generalization of working from home and it will lead to change in people\'s lifestyle.
>>> CORRECT
In my case, I sometimes working from home and it improves my quality of life ( I can never say this to my boss^^).
>>> In my case, I sometimes work from home and it improves my quality of life but of course, I can never say this to my boss.
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