HW 2.18
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think that governments should do this.
Public transport is very useful for traffic jams and environments.
I think Korean have cars too much, and it causes parking problems.
It\'s so hard to find parking area everyday, so we usually park our cars on the road illegally.
Maybe Japan need to have parking places to buy their own cars, so they don\'t park illegally.
Also I heard that public transportation institutes are always in the red, because the price is cheap. To continue this low price, we have to use public transport more.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]!
The government regulates policies in most aspects of our lives and owning a car is no exception. While the car’s evolution has provided unprecedented mobility, it has fundamentally altered the planet’s ecosystems through its entire development. As a result, cars have act as a primary driver of climate change, air pollution, and habitat destruction.
Cars provide unparalleled convenience, personal freedom, and autonomy for daily commuting, errands, and emergency situations. They allow for flexible, on-demand travel, connecting people to workplaces and services, especially in areas with limited public transit.
Is there any possible way to balance the benefits from the detriments?
Your sentences show mastery of grammar rules. Stay cautious of your syntax or word arrangements as well as your commas and other marks. Overall, great job!
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Public transport is very useful for traffic jams and environments.
I think Korean have cars too much, and it causes parking problems.
>>> Yes, I think that governments should do this.
Public transport is very useful for traffic jams and environments.I think Koreans have too many cars, and it causes parking problems.
It\'s so hard to find parking area everyday, so we usually park our cars on the road illegally.
Maybe Japan need to have parking places to buy their own cars, so they don\'t park illegally.
>>> It\'s so hard to find parking area everyday, so we usually park our cars on the road illegally.
Maybe Japan needs to have parking places to buy their own cars, so they don\'t park illegally.
Also I heard that public transportation institutes are always in the red, because the price is cheap. To continue this low price, we have to use public transport more.
Maybe Japan needs to have parking places to buy their own cars, so they don\'t park illegally.
Also I heard that public transportation institutes are always in the red, because the price is cheap. To continue this low price, we have to use public transport more.
>>> Also, I heard that public transportation institutes are always in the red because the price is cheap. To continue this low price, we have to use public transport more. Correct! Very good sentences!
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