hw 2.22
학생이 쓴 원문
What advice would you give to your children about school? Do you think school is too much like a production line in a factory?
I want to say to my children like this “ You don’t have to take even you can’t accept. Don’t accept uncritically.” Because school tend to teach conventional things. It can lead to fixed perspective. It becomes more important to think various point of view actively.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Michelle! ^^
T[이름]k you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I want to say to my children like this “ You don’t have to take even you can’t accept.
>>> I would advise my future children, “ You don’t have to take what you can’t accept.
Don’t accept uncritically.” Because school tend to teach conventional things.
>>> Don’t accept uncritically.” Because schools tend to teach conventional things.
It can lead to fixed perspective.
>>> It can lead to a fixed perspective.
It becomes more important to think various point of view actively.
>>> It\'s more important to think about various points of view actively.
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