HW 2.23
학생이 쓴 원문
I can say about Japanese girl because I was in Japan.
I saw many times that girls are waiting on the line and guys are sitting on the bench when they buy some foods or drinks.
In contrast, it\'s usually the other way in Korea.
Japanese women ride bicycles so many times, but I didn\'t almost see that women ride bicycles, especially young women.
They are really strong.
When I started going to the slope by riding my bicycle, a girl started at the same time. She went so fast, and I was exhausted quickly.
And I feel like that international women smile a lot and they are easygoing.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] [이름]!
I have not met a lot of Japanese women but I worked with them in some projects during events. They are graceful and humble. They smile a lot and are amiable.
For Korean women, they are more reserved, discerning, calculated, and friendly in the long run.
Perhaps, women around the world are the same. Some are gentle, wise, and gorgeous. Others may be the opposite of the said traits. Nonetheless, you can choose where your wife will be coming from someday.
Kindly go through the underlined portions of your composition and master their forms. Great job!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>>> I can say something about Japanese girls because I was in Japan.
I saw many times that girls are waiting on the line and guys are sitting on the bench when they buy some foods or drinks.
In contrast, it\'s usually the other way in Korea.
I saw many times that girls are waiting on the line and guys are sitting on the bench when they buy some foods or drinks.
In contrast, it\'s usually the other way in Korea.
>>> I saw many times that girls are waiting on the line and guys are sitting on the bench when they buy some food or drinks.
In contrast, it\'s usually the other way around in Korea.
Japanese women ride bicycles so many times, but I didn\'t almost see that women ride bicycles, especially young women.
They are really strong.
When I started going to the slope by riding my bicycle, a girl started at the same time. She went so fast, and I was exhausted quickly.
In contrast, it\'s usually the other way around in Korea.
Japanese women ride bicycles so many times, but I didn\'t almost see that women ride bicycles, especially young women.
They are really strong.
When I started going to the slope by riding my bicycle, a girl started at the same time. She went so fast, and I was exhausted quickly.
>>> Correct!
And I feel like that international women smile a lot and they are easygoing.
And I feel like that international women smile a lot and they are easygoing.
>> Finally, I feel that international women smile a lot and they are easygoing.
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