HW 2.3
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the most popular family gathering is wedding, and we pay a lot for this event.
I can often see worries what if anybody does not come here online.
Many people care too much about what other people think.
Nevertheless we are not the same situation, almost want to do like celebrities or someone on Instagram.
I like going to relative\'s wedding, because after my grandfather and grandmother passed away, we barely gather despite holidays, so it\'s only chance to get together with my extended family.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
Weddings are all about love and feeling the warmth from close family and friends. It is true that it is the best amongst all of the family gathering we attend as the lineage expands and your tribe lives on.
As we are at the age of intense social media hyper reality and comparison, we tend to imitate fairy tail-like weddings or even go beyond. In truth, the foundation of the relationship between two people who love each other unconditionally is all that matters.
Therefore, embrace and feel each moment on your sister\'s wedding. Ten years from now, they will also attend yours. Brace yourself that day.
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See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>>> I think the most popular family gathering is weddings, and we pay a lot for this event.
I can often see worries what if anybody does not come here online.
Many people care too much about what other people think.
Nevertheless we are not the same situation, almost want to do like celebrities or someone on Instagram.
I can often see worries what if anybody does not come here online.
Many people care too much about what other people think.
Nevertheless we are not the same situation, almost want to do like celebrities or someone on Instagram.
>>> I can often see worries when nobody comes on the day.
Many people care too much about what other people think.
Nevertheless, we are not in the same situation, almost all want to be like celebrities or someone on Instagram.
I like going to relative\'s wedding, because after my grandfather and grandmother passed away, we barely gather despite holidays, so it\'s only chance to get together with my extended family.
Many people care too much about what other people think.
Nevertheless, we are not in the same situation, almost all want to be like celebrities or someone on Instagram.
I like going to relative\'s wedding, because after my grandfather and grandmother passed away, we barely gather despite holidays, so it\'s only chance to get together with my extended family.
>>> I like going to relative\'s wedding because after my grandfather and grandmother passed away, we barely gather despite holidays, so it\'s the only chance to get together with my extended family.
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