hw-2
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Here\'s the second part.
This story is breaking my heart. T_T
~Teacher Charry
The boss was not nice at all.
>> CORRECT!
He was greedy and vicious so he made Ted steal something from people like other older boys.
>> He was greedy and vicious so he made Ted steal something from people like the other older boys.
If somebody sees him, he might think Ted looks like Oliver Twist.
>> If somebody sees him, he or she might think Ted looks like Oliver Twist.
After 1 year, Ted tried to steal old lady\'s wallet but she grasped it and caught his arm.
>> After one year, Ted tried to steal an old lady\'s wallet but she grasped it and caught his arm.
She was too strong to resist.
>> CORRECT!
Ted looked around to help him but there was no the group of boys for him.
>> Ted looked around for help but there was no one from the group of boys to help him out.
The police officer came there because of the lady\'s reporting and he investigated.
>> The police officer came there because of the lady\'s report and he was investigated.
At the police office, the lady knew that he is an orphan and poor.
>> At the police office, the lady knew that he is an orphan and is poor.
She lost her family last year, so decided to raise him.
>> She lost her family last year, so she decided to raise him.
She thought she can educate him well like her real grand son.
>> CORRECT!
Leaving police office, she took him to her home.
>> After leaving the police office, she took him to her home.
He was resistant at first but she was rich.
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes she bought some delicious snacks for him.
>> CORRECT!
Because his boss didn\'t make him full he was always hungry when he lived on street.
>> Because his boss didn\'t feed him he was always hungry when he lived on the street.
He accepted her as his grand mother fianlly.
>> He finally accepted her as his grandmother.
Ted thought his happiness would last forever but she said flight of ideas..
>> Ted thought his happiness would last forever but she had flight of ideas.
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