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I would buy my car and home first. And I would pay for traveling abroad with my family.
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I would buy my car and home first.
>>CORRECT!
>>I would buy a car and a house first.
And I would pay for traveling abroad with my family.
>>Then I would pay for a tour abroad with my family.
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