hw

I have heard many stories about domestic violence. Many absurd situations occur nowdays. In usual domestic violence, children or women are assaulted by their parents or partners who are addicted to alcohol or have some mental illness. These are absolutely terrible. However, I've heard the different kinds of stories about domestic violence such as offsprings' assault their parents, even their murder one's parents. These kinds of stories are very shocked to me because I cannot imagine the physical attack to one's parents, at that by their children!. I hope no more domestic violence occur.

Hey there!Thank you for doing your homework.

I appreciate your eagerness to learn English.

Please take note of the corrections I made below, and practice them for your improvement.

I hope to hear from you again.

Take Care!

_Teacher Ritchel

I have heard many stories about domestic violence.

>>Correct.

Many absurd situations occur nowdays.

>>There are many absurd situations that occur nowadays.

In usual domestic violence, children or women are assaulted by their parents or partners who are addicted to alcohol or have some mental illness.

>>Correct.

These are absolutely terrible.

>>Correct.

>>or This is absolutely horrible.

However, I\'ve heard the different kinds of stories about domestic violence such as offsprings\' assault their parents, even their murder one\'s parents.

>>I\'ve also heard different kinds of stories about domestic violence in which offsprings assault their parents and even murder them.

These kinds of stories are very shocked to me because I cannot imagine the physical attack to one\'s parents, at that by their children!.

>>These kinds of stories are very shocking to me because I cannot imagine children physically attacking their parents.

I hope no more domestic violence occur.

>>Correct.

>>or I hope there will be no more domestic violence.