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My first goal of this year is passing the exam for my job. I will study hard for it and hope to achieve my goal. And in this year I will read many books. I decided to read one book per month. Actually this plan started from last year but I couldn't do well. I hope I will do well continuously with my first plan year-round and make worthy year.
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HAPPY NEW YEAR, [이름]!
I think you already made a good plan this year.
Do your best and you will achieve that plan in no time.
May you have a spectacular year!
Take care!
My first goal of this year is passing the exam for my job.
>>My first goal this year is passing the exam for my job.
I will study hard for it and hope to achieve my goal.
>>CORRECT!
And in this year I will read many books.
>>This year, I will read many books.
>>I am planning to read lots of books this year.
I decided to read one book per month.
>>CORRECT!
Actually this plan started from last year but I couldn\'t do well.
>>Actually, this plan started last year but I couldn\'t do it well.
I hope I will do well continuously with my first plan year-round and make worthy year.
>>I hope I will do well continuously with my first plan this year and make a worthy year.
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