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2013-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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My first goal of this year is passing the exam for my job. I will study hard for it and hope to achieve my goal. And in this year I will read many books. I decided to read one book per month. Actually this plan started from last year but I couldn't do well. I hope I will do well continuously with my first plan year-round and make worthy year.

강사 첨삭

HAPPY NEW YEAR, [이름]! I think you already made a good plan this year. Do your best and you will achieve that plan in no time. May you have a spectacular year! Take care! My first goal of this year is passing the exam for my job. >>My first goal this year is passing the exam for my job. I will study hard for it and hope to achieve my goal. >>CORRECT! And in this year I will read many books. >>This year, I will read many books. >>I am planning to read lots of books this year. I decided to read one book per month. >>CORRECT! Actually this plan started from last year but I couldn\'t do well. >>Actually, this plan started last year but I couldn\'t do it well. I hope I will do well continuously with my first plan year-round and make worthy year. >>I hope I will do well continuously with my first plan this year and make a worthy year.

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