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2013-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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I buy my clothes depending on the season. First, Korea has clearly distinct weather of 4 seasons. The weather of spring and autumn is similar, but it is very cold in winter and hot in summer. So I should buy the clothes depending on the seasons. Secondly, trend in fashion is chaning very fast, buying the clothes in advace for next season is not good way to be trendy. Last, I tend to buy many clothes to wear every day differently. So it will cost too much for me if I buy the clothes not considering the season. Those are why I buy my clothes depending on the season.

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Hi there!   I envy your fashion taste! Do you know that we here in our country has a strong appreciation to the way you dress up and groom yourselves? Our idea of combining different colors of clothes came from you. We always visit online Korean shops to see your new designs and we usually try to make our clothes and get ups as identical as what you have. We were also influenced by the Korean dramas and K-Pop groups. I agree with you, if you buy clothes that are not in season you will not be fashionable and trendy, say for instance, it is winter but you will buy and wear short skirts and sleeveless right? Good argument for your homework. T. Ritchel I buy my clothes depending on the season. >> I buy my clothes considering the season.  First, Korea has clearly distinct weather of 4 seasons. >>First, Korea has four seasons.  The weather of spring and autumn is similar, but it is very cold in winter and hot in summer. >> Spring and autumn is similar, it\'s very cold during winter and hot during summer.  So I should buy the clothes depending on the seasons. >> That\'s the reason why I buy the clothes and I consider the season when to wear it.  Secondly, trend in fashion is chaning very fast, buying the clothes in advace for next season is not good way to be trendy. >> Second, fashion trend is changing very fast, buying the clothes in advance for the next season is not trendy.  Last, I tend to buy many clothes to wear every day differently. >>Lastly, I tend to buy a lot of different clothes to wear everyday.  So it will cost too much for me if I buy the clothes not considering the season. >> It will be costly for me if I buy clothes which are not in season.  Those are why I buy my clothes depending on the season. >> Those are the reasons why I buy my clothes, and I consider the season.

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