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2013-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

학생이 쓴 원문

1)than 2)than 3)then 4)then 5)then 6)then 7)than 8)then 9)than 10)then I was going to take a shower after stuyding through the phone. Because I woke up a bit late. So, I took a taxi not to miss the suttle bus. Taking a taxi takes much more money than bus about 2 dollors. I try to take bus to save much money. Anyway, I came here without taking a shower. So, I took a shower as soon as done. Our standmeeting starts at 8:10 am every morning. I had the time to take a shower. And also, I didn't buy anything as breakfast. I'll go to the first floor to buy something to get feel full for me after standmeeting. Oh, It's time to have a standmeeting. Bye~

강사 첨삭

You take can take a shower at work? I didn\'t know that that is even possible. I guess your company has really good facilities. ^^ Well, try to get something healthy for breakfast. Enjoy it! T. Aurora 1)than >>Correct! 2)than >>Correct! 3)then >>Correct! 4)then >>than 5)then >>Correct! 6)then >>Correct! 7)than >>Correct! 8)then >>Correct! 9)than >>Correct! 10)then >>Correct!I was going to take a shower after stuyding through the phone. >>Correct! Because I woke up a bit late. >>Correct! So, I took a taxi not to miss the suttle bus. >>So, I took a taxi so I won\'t miss the shuttle bus. Taking a taxi takes much more money than bus about 2 dollors. >>Taking a taxi costs 2 dollars more than a bus.  I try to take bus to save much money.>>Correct!Anyway, I came here without taking a shower. >>Correct!  So, I took a shower as soon as done. >>So i took a shower as soon as I was done. Our standmeeting starts at 8:10 am every morning. >>Correct!  I had the time to take a shower. >>Correct!  And also, I didn\'t buy anything as breakfast. >>And also, I didn\'t buy anything for breakfast.  I\'ll go to the first floor to buy something to get feel full for me after standmeeting. >>I\'ll go to the first floor to buy something and feel full after the stand meeting.Oh, It\'s time to have a standmeeting. Bye~ >>Oh, it\'s time for the stand meeting. Bye!

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