HW
학생이 쓴 원문
I've decided to study harder than useal cuz' my friend made me enthuasic for studying that. He can speak in english very well. I was so frustrated at him due to fluently speaking in english.
I've been talking to him for 1 hour in english. I could say what I want to say a little bit. I felt my english skill has been better step by step. Anyway, I felt the need to make sentences that I want to say more naturally.
I had been working for 8 hours right after arriving my office. I'm gonna work again due to the deadline to presentation. I was given to things by my supervisor about using image codec of android. I was so happy to be assigned to anything.
I'm gonna make some materials which can deliver much information for all audience who will be attending my seminar. To do that, I will try to make lots of meterials which is useful for them.
강사 첨삭
Hello There,
I am very happy to know that you decided to study even more. I will try my best so that you can be just like your friend. I know with your eagerness to learn, you will be able to attain your goal in an instant. Let\'s work together to reach this goal.
Have fun!!!
T. Aurora
I\'ve decided to study harder than useal cuz\' my friend made me enthuasic for studying that.
>> I\'ve decided to study harder than usual cuz\' my friend made me enthuasic in studying that.
He can speak in english very well.
>> He can speak English very well.
I was so frustrated at him due to fluently speaking in english.>> I was frustrated because he can speak English fluently.I\'ve been talking to him for 1 hour in english.
>> Correct!
I could say what I want to say a little bit.
>> I could say what I wanted to say.
>>OR: Sometimes, I can express myself.
I felt my english skill has been better step by step.
>> I felt that my English skill is getting better step by step.
>>OR: I felt that my English skill is getting better as time goes by
Anyway, I felt the need to make sentences that I want to say more naturally.>> Anyway, I felt like I needed to make a sentence in a natural way.
>>OR: Anyway, I feel like I need to express myself in a natural way.I had been working for 8 hours right after arriving my office.
>> I had been working for 8 hours after I arrived in my office.
I\'m gonna work again due to the deadline to presentation.
>> I\'m going to work again because the deadline of my presentation is near.
I was given to things by my supervisor about using image codec of android.
>> I was given a lot of things to do by my supervisor using the image codec of android.
I was so happy to be assigned to anything.
>> I was so happy that I was assigned to do anything.I\'m gonna make some materials which can deliver much information for all audience who will be attending my seminar.
>> I\'m gonna make some material that can deliver more informations to the audience who will be attending the seminar.
To do that, I will try to make lots of meterials which is useful for them.
>> To be able to do that, I have to make a lot of materials which can be useful to them.
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