HW
학생이 쓴 원문
1. D
2. A
3. A
4. D
5. A
As I told you, I slept in my office for 2 days. I didn't go my home to take a rest. So, I should go home to take a rest and go to bed asleep today.
I haven't ever written my composition since Monday. I though of why I didn't write this. The reason why I didn't write this is that my works make me lazy. I'll try to keep writting my composition.
I have a big mistake... Last Friday, I met my forginer friend who always speak english after work. He let his girfirend introduce to me and we drunk beer in HongDae. We went to a bar where many forginers are in usal. I was so surprised with that. It seemed that I stood on the chair in other contury. Anyway, I was standing in front of the toilet. A man looks english was also standing for that. I tried to talk to him first. Eventually, I was given to his phone number.
But... I knew that the situation that I asked him to let me know your number makes me feel a gay. It was a mistake. I've nerver known the culture. I texted him to have him understand that situation exactly. I wanted to tell him "I'm not a gay" and said that. He told me he was wondering if I'm a gay or not.
강사 첨삭
So is the English man gay? That made me so curious. Well not all English men are gay. It was probably just a misunderstanding. But better be careful next time especially when you\'re getting phone numbers in a bar or club. That usually means you\'re interested in them. Well, I hope you get to go home and have some much need rest. Talk to you tomorrow.
T. Aurora
1. D
>>A2. A
>>Correct!3. A
>>D
4. D
>>A5. A
>>CAs I told you, I slept in my office for 2 days.
>>Correct!
I didn\'t go my home to take a rest.
>>I didn\'t go home to take a rest.
So, I should go home to take a rest and go to bed asleep today.>>So I should go home to take a rest and get some sleep today.I haven\'t ever written my composition since Monday.
>>Correct!
I though of why I didn\'t write this.
>>I thought of a reason why I didn\'t write this.
The reason why I didn\'t write this is that my works make me lazy.
>>The reason why I didn\'t write this is that my work has been making me lazy.
I\'ll try to keep writting my composition.>>I\'ll try to keep writing my compositions.I have a big mistake...
>>Correct!
Last Friday, I met my forginer friend who always speak english after work.
>>Last Friday, I met a foreigner friend whol always I always speak English to after work.
He let his girfirend introduce to me and we drunk beer in HongDae.
>>He introduced his girlfriend and we drunk beer in Hongdae.
We went to a bar where many forginers are in usal.
>>We went to a bar where many foreigners go.
I was so surprised with that.
>>Correct!
It seemed that I stood on the chair in other contury.
>>It seemed like I was sitting on a chair in another country.
Anyway, I was standing in front of the toilet.
>>Anyway, I was standing in front of a toilet.
A man looks english was also standing for that.
>>A man that looks English was also standing there.
I tried to talk to him first.
>>Correct! OR
>>I tried to start a conversation.
Eventually, I was given to his phone number.>>Eventually, he gave me his phone numberBut... I knew that the situation that I asked him to let me know your number makes me feel a gay.
>>But I knew that asking for his phone number might make him think I\'m gay.
It was a mistake.
>>Correct!
I\'ve nerver known the culture.
>>I don\'t know of their culture.
>>I\'m not familiar with their culture.
I texted him to have him understand that situation exactly.
>>Correct!
I wanted to tell him \"I\'m not a gay\" and said that.
>>I wanted to tell him that I\'m not gay.
He told me he was wondering if I\'m a gay or not.
>>Correct!
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