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2013-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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1. D 2. A 3. A 4. D 5. A As I told you, I slept in my office for 2 days. I didn't go my home to take a rest. So, I should go home to take a rest and go to bed asleep today. I haven't ever written my composition since Monday. I though of why I didn't write this. The reason why I didn't write this is that my works make me lazy. I'll try to keep writting my composition. I have a big mistake... Last Friday, I met my forginer friend who always speak english after work. He let his girfirend introduce to me and we drunk beer in HongDae. We went to a bar where many forginers are in usal. I was so surprised with that. It seemed that I stood on the chair in other contury. Anyway, I was standing in front of the toilet. A man looks english was also standing for that. I tried to talk to him first. Eventually, I was given to his phone number. But... I knew that the situation that I asked him to let me know your number makes me feel a gay. It was a mistake. I've nerver known the culture. I texted him to have him understand that situation exactly. I wanted to tell him "I'm not a gay" and said that. He told me he was wondering if I'm a gay or not.

강사 첨삭

 So is the English man gay? That made me so curious. Well not all English men are gay. It was probably just a misunderstanding. But better be careful next time especially when you\'re getting phone numbers in a bar or club. That usually means you\'re interested in them. Well, I hope you get to go home and have some much need rest. Talk to you tomorrow. T. Aurora 1. D >>A2. A >>Correct!3. A >>D 4. D >>A5. A >>CAs I told you, I slept in my office for 2 days. >>Correct!  I didn\'t go my home to take a rest. >>I didn\'t go home to take a rest. So, I should go home to take a rest and go to bed asleep today.>>So I should go home to take a rest and get some sleep today.I haven\'t ever written my composition since Monday. >>Correct!  I though of why I didn\'t write this. >>I thought of a reason why I didn\'t write this. The reason why I didn\'t write this is that my works make me lazy. >>The reason why I didn\'t write this is that my work has been making me lazy. I\'ll try to keep writting my composition.>>I\'ll try to keep writing my compositions.I have a big mistake... >>Correct!  Last Friday, I met my forginer friend who always speak english after work. >>Last Friday, I met a foreigner friend whol always I always speak English to after work. He let his girfirend introduce to me and we drunk beer in HongDae. >>He introduced his girlfriend and we drunk beer in Hongdae. We went to a bar where many forginers are in usal. >>We went to a bar where many foreigners go.  I was so surprised with that. >>Correct! It seemed that I stood on the chair in other contury. >>It seemed like I was sitting on a chair in another country.  Anyway, I was standing in front of the toilet. >>Anyway, I was standing in front of a toilet. A man looks english was also standing for that. >>A man that looks English was also standing there. I tried to talk to him first. >>Correct! OR >>I tried to start a conversation. Eventually, I was given to his phone number.>>Eventually, he gave me his phone numberBut... I knew that the situation that I asked him to let me know your number makes me feel a gay. >>But I knew that asking for his phone number might make him think I\'m gay. It was a mistake. >>Correct! I\'ve nerver known the culture. >>I don\'t know of their culture. >>I\'m not familiar with their culture.  I texted him to have him understand that situation exactly. >>Correct! I wanted to tell him \"I\'m not a gay\" and said that. >>I wanted to tell him that I\'m not gay. He told me he was wondering if I\'m a gay or not. >>Correct!

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