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학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
How has your family background affected the way you see the world?
My family changed my life background. They told me to have a dream.
So I always thinks about my dream. I chosed my dream become to a bussinessman.
It will give high salary ang I will like that job. Then I can live hapilly. So that's the reason that why I chosed that jobs.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
Thank you so much for sending this in.
I am so proud of you!
You were able to express yourself, but of course, be careful with your diction.
Anyway, I hope that you are having a great time.
See you!
_T.Jeny^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:How has your family background affected the way you see the world? My family changed my life background. They told me to have a dream.
>>My family changed my life because they advised me to have a dream.So I always thinks about my dream. I chosed my dream become to a bussinessman.
>>So I always think about my dream and I chose to be a businessman.It will give high salary ang I will like that job. Then I can live hapilly. So that\'s the reason that why I chosed that jobs.
>>I wil give high salaries to my employees and I will love my job to live happily. This is the reason why I chose this job.
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