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2013-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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I don't think I have any precious items to me. Now I look around my home but I can't find anything precious to me. It could be the accountbook if i have to find one thing. Things can be replaceable such as bags, sunglasses and clothes. they will be worn out someday so that I don't imply much meaning to them.(I don't put much meaning to them. ) I prefer experience expence to buying products.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!! A pleasant Monday morning... As always you make sense with your answer. :) Indeed, experiences are more valueable than items... Anyway, kindly check the corrections I made for you. Have a nice day and see you in class! T.Kristel I don\'t think I have any precious items to me. >> I don\'t think I have any item I could consider precious to me. Now I look around my home but I can\'t find anything precious to me. >>Now, I\'m looking around my home but I can\'t find anything.  It could be the accountbook if i have to find one thing. >>CORRECT!! Things can be replaceable such as bags, sunglasses and clothes. >>Things such as bags, sunglasses and clothes can be replaceable.  they will be worn out someday so that I don\'t imply much meaning to them.(I don\'t put much meaning to them. ) >>They will be worn out someday so I don\'t put so much meaning in them.I prefer experience expence to buying products. >>I prefer experience to buying products.

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