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Aim for success, not perfection. Never give up your right to be wrong, because then you will lose the ability to learn new things and move forward with your life. The ability to learn new things is a step forward to aim high and reach for your goals.
T. Jeny
The expression \"Never, never give up\" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goal.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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>>Answer: I agree that I need to have a goal for my dreams because it is a motivation for me achieve my goals.
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