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2013-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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1)quickly 2)pretty 3)terriblely 4)good 5)easyly - composition for today- In Europe, the request of extending copyright protection to 95 years is getting stronger. Referring to the U.S law, Roy checks related issues and concerns. In London, Trio is practicing Mozart before its next performance. This group gets performance fee and dividends from CD sales. But ofcourse they can claim neither copyright nor loyalty for the orgin Mozart. NY court has made the verdict that copyright of all music that the record label EMI has issued ever belongs to EMI even after copyright has expired. Although the verdict only applies to NY, Kim says only listeners who find out unknown classic music thanks to downloading will suffer from copyright expansion. The victim will be the consumer because the consumer can't have access to these music files anymore. It's because the original copyright owners prevent consumers from using it. And available music will become expansive.

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Hi [이름]! How\'s it going? I checked your composition and here are the corrections. Good job with the homework. Just don\'t forget to check your spelling. See you in class! T.WENDY<3 1)quickly >> Correct2)pretty >> Correct3)terriblely >> terribly4)good >> Correct5)easyly >> easily- composition for today- >> CorrectIn Europe, the request of extending copyright protection to 95 years is getting stronger. >>  In Europe, the request of extending the copyright protection to 95 years is getting stronger. Referring to the U.S law, Roy checks related issues and concerns. >> Correct In London, Trio is practicing Mozart before its next performance. >> Correct This group gets performance fee and dividends from CD sales. >> Correct But ofcourse they can claim neither copyright nor loyalty for the orgin Mozart. >> But ofcourse they can claim neither the copyright nor the loyalty for the orgin of Mozart.NY court has made the verdict that copyright of all music that the record label EMI has issued ever belongs to EMI even after copyright has expired. >> NY court has made a verdict that the copyright of all music that the record label EMI has issued ever belongs to EMI even after thecopyright has already expired.Although the verdict only applies to NY, Kim says only listeners who find out unknown classic music thanks to downloading will suffer from copyright expansion. >> Although the verdict only applies to NY, Kim says only listeners who find out unknown classic music, thanks to downloading, will suffer from the copyright expansion.The victim will be the consumer because the consumer can\'t have access to these music files anymore. >> Correct It\'s because the original copyright owners prevent consumers from using it. >> Correct And available music will become expansive. >> Correct

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