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2013-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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1.elder eldest 2.worse worst 3.more ", most" 4.larger, largest 5.better best Today is a big day for Kims. This couple asked experts to give a house in Melbern a makeover so that it can be look more attractive when potential buyers come to see the house. I don't like that other people come to my home and interrupt telling me where this should be. I don't buy that they can transform my house in such a short time. After Kim's family leves the house for the day, three of so called 'style angels' invaded the house armed with paintings, ornaments and more paintings. These people are full time employees of Hip House. This small company turns inside out everything in the house. They declares war against all house junk. We bring out old furnitures and call in a professional crack cleaner. The cleaner wipes the ceiling. After they finish, movers bring in a fabulous sofa. As a result, in a few hours the living room shanges from this to this. The room where a ping-pong table was looks good

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Hi [이름]! How\'s your day? I hope you are having a great time. I checked your composition and here are the corrections. Feel free to ask questions if you have any concerns. See you in class. -T. WENDY 1.elder eldest >> Correct2.worse worst >> Correct3.more \", most\" >> Correct4.larger, largest >> Correct5.better best >> CorrectToday is a big day for Kims. >> Today is a big day for the Kims. This couple asked experts to give a house in Melburn a makeover so that it can be look more attractive when potential buyers come to see the house. >> This couple asked experts to give a house in Melbourn a makeover so that it can be look more attractive when potential buyers come to see the house. I don\'t like that other people come to my home and interrupt telling me where this should be. >> I don\'t like other people coming to my home, interrupting and telling me where things should be. I don\'t buy that they can transform my house in such a short time. >> I don\'t believe that they can transform my house in such a short time. After Kim\'s family leves the house for the day, three of so called \'style angels\' invaded the house armed with paintings, ornaments and more paintings. >> After Kim\'s family leaves the house for the day, three of the so called \'style angels\' invaded the house armed with paintings, ornaments and more paintings. These people are full time employees of Hip House. >> Correct This small company turns inside out everything in the house. >> This small company turns everything in the house inside-out. They declares war against all house junk. >> They declared war against all the house junk.We bring out old furnitures and call in a professional crack cleaner. >> We brought out old furnitures and call in a professional crack cleaner. The cleaner wipes the ceiling. >> Correct After they finish, movers bring in a fabulous sofa. >> Correct As a result, in a few hours the living room shanges from this to this. >>  As a result, in a few hours the living room changed from this to that. The room where a ping-pong table was looks good >> The room with a ping-pong table looks good.

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