hw 3-1
학생이 쓴 원문
Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
When I was high school student, I lived in a small city where is far from the capital. There is only one university in there. At that time, I didn't know exactly why I didn't want to go that school, but anyway most of my friends as well as I wanted to go other universities.
Now I can guess why. As a matter of fact, they wanted to go other places where nobody bothers them, not other school. They wanted to escape from their parents or their small city.
Plus, they have kinds of fantasies like culture of university, meeting someone and learning new knowledges. By these mean, the university in their hometown didn't make them excited.
These reasons are not logical and serious. But everybody who is the third grade in high school has thought that kind of thinking.
강사 첨삭
Wow! Interesting fact! Well I have to agree. Many kids likes to be away from their families and have a bit of independence and adventure. Thanks for doing your homework!
T. Aurora
Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries.
Why do some students study abroad?
Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. When I was high school student, I lived in a small city where is far from the capital.
>>When I was a high school student, I lived in a small city far from the capital.
There is only one university in there.
>>There is only one university there.
At that time, I didn\'t know exactly why I didn\'t want to go that school, but anyway most of my friends as well as I wanted to go other universities.>>At that time, I didn\'t know exactly why I didn\'t want to go to that school, but anyway most of my friends as well as I wanted to go to other universities.
Now I can guess why.
>>Correct!
As a matter of fact, they wanted to go other places where nobody bothers them, not other school.
>>As a matter of fact, they wanted to go to other places where nobody can bother them, not because they wanted to be in a different school.
They wanted to escape from their parents or their small city.
>>Correct!Plus, they have kinds of fantasies like culture of university, meeting someone and learning new knowledges.
>>Plus, they have fantasies like the university culture, meeting someone and learning new knowledges.
By these mean, the university in their hometown didn\'t make them excited.
>>This means, the university in their hometown does not excite them.These reasons are not logical and serious.
>>Correct!
But everybody who is the third grade in high school has thought that kind of thinking.
>>But everybody who is in the third grade in high school has thought about the same thing.
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