HW 3.10
학생이 쓴 원문
Normal people including me are difficult to understand abstract artwork. Modern artwork is so complicated. Even if I read the explanation, I often don\'t understand anymore. To reduce this, it\'s important to make explanation more intuitive. And make the artwork itself easier to understand.
If we don\'t understand abstract artworks, we can understand whatever we are interested in like if I\'m interested in World War 2, I can seek out some artworks about World War 2.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
I could not agree more with your point. I actually think that defining art or making sense of it is sometimes a total waste of time. Since I majored in literature, there are some readings and artwork that I analyzed overtime and many of them do not connect or make any relevance in daily life encounters.
Perhaps, that is my shallow viewpoint about art.
Since many works of art are too abstruse for an ordinary person to appreciate, they abandon the idea of even taking a short glimpse of what a masterpiece looks like. Truly, choosing your penchant is the best way to keep your interest in arts.
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-T. Donna~
>>> Normal people including me have difficulties in understanding abstract artwork. Modern artwork is so complicated. Even if I read the explanation, I often don\'t understand it anymore. To reduce this, it\'s important to make explanation more intuitive and make the artwork itself easier to understand.
If we don\'t understand abstract artworks, we can understand whatever we are interested in like if I\'m interested in World War 2, I can seek out some artworks about World War 2.
If we don\'t understand abstract artworks, we can understand whatever we are interested in like if I\'m interested in World War 2, I can seek out some artworks about World War 2.
>>> If we don\'t understand abstract artwork, we can understand whatever we are interested in like if I\'m interested in World War 2, I can seek out some artworks about World War 2.
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