HW 3.13
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, of course. I really want to take a nap for a long time. I like taking a power nap before studying or after eating.
But every time I take a nap, I end up taking a long nap like around 2 hours.
So, I try not to take a nap as much as possible.
When I was in Japan, I took power naps a lot. I didn\'t do this before in Korea. I think library\'s chairs in Japan are more comfortable than Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]!
Who does not want to take a nap when nature is calling you to do so? It is the body\'s innate biological rhythm. It is supposed to provide necessary brief respite from losing energy and cognitive function. Thus, fighting it is so challenging at times.
The Internet says, \"taking a nap in Japan is considered natural due to a unique, respected cultural practice known as \"inemuri\", which translates to \"sleeping while present\". Unlike in many Western cultures where napping at work may be viewed as laziness, in Japan, this practice is seen as a sign of dedication, hard work, and extreme exhaustion from duty.\"
Below, you got two parts of your composition correctly. Great job! You can almost perfectly create an error-free essay. Take note of the last part.
See you in class later.
-T. Donna~
But every time I take a nap, I end up taking a long nap like around 2 hours.
>>> Correct!
So, I try not to take a nap as much as possible.
So, I try not to take a nap as much as possible.
>>> Correct!
When I was in Japan, I took power naps a lot. I didn\'t do this before in Korea. I think library\'s chairs in Japan are more comfortable than Korea.
When I was in Japan, I took power naps a lot. I didn\'t do this before in Korea. I think library\'s chairs in Japan are more comfortable than Korea.
>>> When I was in Japan, I took power naps a lot/ I took a lot of power naps. I didn\'t do this before in Korea. I think the library\'s chairs in Japan are more comfortable than Korea.
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