HW(3/13, 3/14, 3/15), Diary : How to make a balance in my life as taking care of a new born baby?

2013-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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HW[3/13] 1) waiting 2)interesting 3)broken 4)forgotten 5)working 6)going 7)required 8)talking 9)exciting 10)living HW[3/14] 1)Do 2)Does 3)Do 4)Do 5)Do 6)Does 7)Do 8)Do 9)Does 10)Do HW[3/15] 1)the 2)an 3)the 4)X 5)the 6)an 7)a 8)X 9)X 10)X [Diary] During the weekend, I spent a lot of time with my son, so there was no time for myself. It is not fair! Actually, I was a bit distressed by the fact that the weekend passed away without refreshing myself. It's time to make a balance between me and my family. The challenge is that my wife can't help being with my son all the time. If I went out for having my own time, then she would complain that I am not willing to stay with them. So the first thing I should do is to bring her on the same ground with me, and trying to pursuade her to accept how important it is to have personal time for each other. As far as I'm concerned, quality of my life is a top priority. I can't serve my family if I'm unhappy. I believe my wife is similar in this respect.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for checking your evaluation page and doing some of your homework. I understand how you feel. You want to be alone for some time to be relaxed. But you know [이름], for us wives, it is very important to feel the presence of our husbands. However, just try to talk to your wife sincerely about your concern. As we know, communication is necessary for a succesful marriage. I know your wife will understand. ^^ Anyway, thank you [이름] for sharing this with me. I think this is too personal, I feel I can be trusted. ^.^ See you later! Cheerios! Teacher Grace HW[3/13] 1) waiting >> Correct 2)interesting >> Correct 3)broken >> Correct 4)forgotten >> Correct 5)working >> Correct 6)going  >> Correct 7)required  >> repaired 8)talking >> Correct 9)exciting >> excited 10)living >> Correct HW[3/14] 1)Do >> Correct 2)Does  >> Correct 3)Do >> Correct 4)Do >> Correct 5)Do >> Correct 6)Does >> Correct 7)Do >> Correct 8)Do >> Correct 9)Does >> Correct 10)Do >> Correct HW[3/15] 1 )the >> Correct 2)an >> Correct 3)the  >> Correct 4)X >> Correct 5)the>> an 6)an >> Correct 7)a >> Correct 8)X >> Correct 9)X >> a 10)X >> the [Diary] During the weekend, I spent a lot of time with my son, so there was no time for myself. >> Correct It is not fair! >> Correct Actually, I was a bit distressed by the fact that the weekend passed away without refreshing myself. >> Actually, I was a bit distressed because of the fact that the weekend passed without refreshing myself.  It\'s time to make a balance between me and my family. >> Correct The challenge is that my wife can\'t help being with my son all the time. >> Correct If I went out for having my own time, then she would complain that I am not willing to stay with them. >> If I go out to have some time for myself then she will complain that I don\'t want to stay with them. So the first thing I should do is to bring her on the same ground with me, and trying to pursuade her to accept how important it is to have personal time for each other. >> So the first thing I should do is to bring her on my situation and try to convince her that it is important to have our own personal time without each other. As far as I\'m concerned, quality of my life is a top priority. >> As far as I\'m concerned, the quality of my life is the top most priority.  I can\'t serve my family if I\'m unhappy. I believe my wife is similar in this respect. >> Correct

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