HW 3.18
학생이 쓴 원문
I just spend my time with my family, walking in the park with my dog, having some food, and watching TV shows in the coach. Sometimes we go to the cemetery for ceremony. This is a traditional thing, not about a religion.
If I have a girlfriend, maybe I\'m going on a date with her. Actually, my parents always say why are you just at home!, get out and go on a date with someone. But, it\'s not as easy as they think.
One of the this year\'s goal is to get a girlfriend, and I\'ll date on Christmas. But If I don\'t get a girlfriend, I\'ll spend Christmas with my family, because my parent\'s wedding anniversary is Christmas eve. And I\'ll get nagged by my parents.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
I am glad that you understood the question. I read it again and I thought it was vague. Clearly, you knew that it was referring to \'holidays\'. So, these occupy your time.
We all have similar experiences of cultural traditions, communal food and spaces, and brutal expectations. ^^
Spending time with the family makes them want to ask about our personal preferences/ choices such as having a relationship. I guess, the more they push people into a relationship, the faster it gets jinxed. ^^ Understand thatthey also sometimes have the right to know, especially your parents.
So, make sure to be an alpha male out there to connect to the best lady who you will be on a date with on Christmas 2026. I am super excited as your parents!
Note down all the suggestions made on your essay. It was very good. Keep it up.
See you soon.
-T. Donna~
>>> I just spend my time with my family, walking in the park with my dog, having some food, and watching TV shows on the couch. Sometimes we go to the cemetery for a ceremony. This is a traditional thing, not about a religion.
If I have a girlfriend, maybe I\'m going on a date with her. Actually, my parents always say why are you just at home!, get out and go on a date with someone. But, it\'s not as easy as they think.
If I have a girlfriend, maybe I\'m going on a date with her. Actually, my parents always say why are you just at home!, get out and go on a date with someone. But, it\'s not as easy as they think.
>>> If I have a girlfriend, maybe I\'m going on a date with her. Actually, my parents always say why am I just at home. I should go out and go on a date with someone. But, it\'s not as easy as they think.
One of the this year\'s goal is to get a girlfriend, and I\'ll date on Christmas. But If I don\'t get a girlfriend, I\'ll spend Christmas with my family, because my parent\'s wedding anniversary is Christmas eve. And I\'ll get nagged by my parents.
>>> One of the this year\'s goal is to have a girlfriend, and I\'ll date on Christmas. But if I don\'t get a girlfriend, I\'ll spend Christmas with my family, because my parents\' wedding anniversary is Christmas Eve and I\'ll get nagged by my parents.
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