HW(3/18, 3/19), Diary : Another ego lives in me!

2013-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

학생이 쓴 원문

[HW3/18]1)doesn't2)do3)doesn't4)does5)Doesn't6)don't7)do8)don't9)Doesn't10)Do[3/19]1)He often listens2)They sometimes read3)Pete never gets4)is usually very5)I sometimes take6)are often hungry7)grandmother always goes8)Walter usually helps9)They never watch10)Christine never smokes.[Diary]Jekyll and Hide is famous for us.Originally, it is a novel.Nowadays, it also comes to us as musical, or play.In this story, Jekyll is a normal guy whol lives his daily life with no big trouble.However, he sometimes becomes totally different person, who is called Hide.Hide is aggressive, and likes to make something wrong.Jekyll is filled with angush as asking himself what his true ego is - Jekyll or Hide. He can't choose only one becausethey exist together.I confess that several copies of myself dwell in me.They are totally different each other.The one whom I don't want to meet at the most is "Anger".My concern is that he sometimes gives rise from myself, and make some people scared and painful.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for this composition. I think all of us have our \"alter-egos\". I think this is our way of coping up from both the good and bad experiences that we have. I think I also have a lot of egos in me. Anyway, let\'s talk about this later in class! See you! Cheerios! Teacher Grace [HW3/18] 1)doesn\'t >> Correct 2)do >> Correct 3)doesn\'t>> Correct 4)does >> do 5)Doesn\'t >> Does 6)don\'t >> Correct 7)do >> Correct 8)don\'t >> Correct 9)Doesn\'t >> Does 10)Do >> Correct [3/19] 1)He often listens >> Correct 2)They sometimes read >> Correct 3)Pete never gets >> Correct 4)is usually very >> Correct 5)I sometimes take >> Correct 6)are often hungry >> Correct 7)grandmother always goes >> Correct 8)Walter usually helps >> Correct 9)They never watch >> Correct 10)Christine never smokes >> Correct Diary] Jekyll and Hide is famous for us. >> Jekyll and Hide is famous to us. Originally, it is a novel. >> Correct Nowadays, it also comes to us as musical, or play. >> Nowadays, it also comes to us as a musical or a play. In this story, Jekyll is a normal guy who lives his daily life with no big trouble. >> Correct However, he sometimes becomes totally different person, who is called Hide. >> However, he sometimes becomes a totally different person whom he calls as Hide. Hide is aggressive, and likes to make something wrong. >> Correct Jekyll is filled with angush as asking himself what his true ego is - Jekyll or Hide. >> Jekyll is filled with anguish as he asks his ego if he\'s Jekyll or Hide.  He can\'t choose only one becausethey exist together. >> He can\'t choose between the two because those persons co-exists. I confess that several copies of myself dwell in me. >> I confess that I have a lot of alter-egos in me. They are totally different each other. >> They are totally different from one another. The one whom I don\'t want to meet at the most is \"Anger\". >> The one whom I don\'t want to meet is the person of anger. My concern is that he sometimes gives rise from myself, and make some people scared and painful. >> My concern is that he sometimes gives off himself out of me and that scares people.

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