HW 3.19
학생이 쓴 원문
I just want to go somewhere in Korea with my family. We don\'t have a lot of memory traveling somewhere in Korea.
I want to go to the hotel possible to be with a dog. And I\'d like to relax playing with my dog, watching TV shows, swimming in the pool, and having a barbecue party.
We had the barbecue party only once time in Jeju island when I was in a child. It was not Korean style, so my father burnt every meet and a grill. My father was upset, and he ruined my first barbecue party. So, I want to do this want more time, and I\'ve got to do a barbecue!
And I want to hear what my sister will do at hers husband\'s house, because she\'ll go there first after wedding. I don\'t want my sister too cook a lot there, because she\'s so slow and lazy, so she might get nagged.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
While checking your essay, I learned a lot of information. The last part made me fall on my seat laughing. ^^
Travelling is one enjoyable activity for the whole family until one starts acting up and stressing other members. believe me, I had my own share of worse cases. Sometimes, I am the stressor. Hahaha...
I hope that you can do a repeat of your barbeque party. That time, you will set the fire, the mood, and the happiness of your family. If life was difficult before, it does not have to be now that you have made a difference.
It is thrilling to know how your sister is doing, not that it is my business but out of curiosity of how a married life looks like for a new couple. Be gentle in asking your sister how she is doing. She might have some challenging moments adjusting to her new life.
Below, master the grammar patterns by comparing the underscored parts to your original composition. This is an interesting and well explained work. Very good!
See you in a few.
-T. Donna~
I just want to go somewhere in Korea with my family. We don\'t have a lot of memory traveling somewhere in Korea.
I want to go to the hotel possible to be with a dog. And I\'d like to relax playing with my dog, watching TV shows, swimming in the pool, and having a barbecue party.>>> I just want to go somewhere in Korea with my family. We don\'t have a lot of memory traveling somewhere in Korea.
I want to go to the hotel possibly with a dog. Moreover, I\'d like to relax playing with my dog, watching TV shows, swimming in the pool, and having a barbecue party.We had the barbecue party only once time in Jeju island when I was in a child. It was not Korean style, so my father burnt every meet and a grill. My father was upset, and he ruined my first barbecue party. So, I want to do this want more time, and I\'ve got to do a barbecue!
>>> We had the barbecue party only once time in Jeju island when I was a child. It was not the Korean style, so my father burnt every meat and grill. My father was upset, and he ruined my first barbecue party. So, I want to do this one more time, and I\'ve got to do a barbecue!
And I want to hear what my sister will do at hers husband\'s house, because she\'ll go there first after wedding. I don\'t want my sister too cook a lot there, because she\'s so slow and lazy, so she might get nagged.
And I want to hear what my sister will do at hers husband\'s house, because she\'ll go there first after wedding. I don\'t want my sister too cook a lot there, because she\'s so slow and lazy, so she might get nagged.
>>> I want to hear what my sister will do to her husband\'s house, because she\'ll go there first after her wedding. I don\'t want my sister too cook a lot there, because she\'s so slow and lazy, so she might get nagged.
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