hw 3-2
학생이 쓴 원문
There can be some different reasons. Nowsdays. Finding a person of limited scope is more difficult than before. because of the development for media. Nowhere is a computer and internet network. They can go thought secondhand experience. So many students know how here where they are is small. There are so many chances to experience everything, to learn something, to be famous person in the world. And they also know that much more chances are in a big place.
Exactly speaking, many students want to catch more cards that they can do more things
That is why many students want to go abroad and other place's university.
강사 첨삭
Keep your opinions and ideas flowing Doris. I like how broadly and intricate you\'ve answer to this homework is. Talk to you tomorrow!
T. Aurora
There can be some different reasons.
>>There can be different reasons.
Nowsdays. Finding a person of limited scope is more difficult than before. because of the development for media.
>>Now a days, finding a person of limited scope is more difficult than before because of the development of media.
Nowhere is a computer and internet network.
>>You can find a computer and an internet network everywhere.
They can go thought secondhand experience.
>>They can learn a lot from the browsing the internet.
So many students know how here where they are is small.
>>So many students know how small their world is.
There are so many chances to experience everything, to learn something, to be famous person in the world.
>>Correct!
And they also know that much more chances are in a big place. >>And they also know that there are much more chances is other places.
Exactly speaking, many students want to catch more cards that they can do more things>>Frankly speaking, many students want to catch more cards so that they can do more things.
That is why many students want to go abroad and other place\'s university.
>>Correct!
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