HW 3.2
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could turn back the past, I would change my choice about my middle-school friends. I didn\'t get along with them from third year of middle school because they didn\'t study, didn\'t think of their future, they just hung out every single day. That time, I thought I want to live abroad, so I started to keep my distance from them. Finally, I\'ve not contacted them anymore.
But I regret it because I lost all my middle-school connections. I dreamed that day\'s stories sometimes, maybe I miss it. I don\'t have courage to reach out first.
So, If I go back, I continue keeping in touch with them.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]!
When we were young, we may not have enough experience in choosing friends. Our parents cannot guide us always to choose the right friends. They can only recommend some characteristics and family background.
Surprisingly now that I am an adult, the friends I chose from high school are still my good friends-the rich and the wise. Sometimes, these friends are rolled in one and are good looking too. They work hard, they are respectful, well bred, have manners, and have integrity in their family background. They never acted or behaved poorly. Even though I was poor when I was young, being friends with the rich people made me a \'richer\' person today.
If we regret the past, it means we learned a lot of lessons. If we chose well, that becomes the best memory. In truth, we cannot go back to the past. Ergo, live your life well today.
Consider my grammar suggestions. They were undescored for your perusal. Great job as always!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
But I regret it because I lost all my middle-school connections. I dreamed that day\'s stories sometimes, maybe I miss it. I don\'t have courage to reach out first.
But I regret it because I lost all my middle-school connections. I dreamed that day\'s stories sometimes, maybe I miss it. I don\'t have courage to reach out first.
>>> But I regret it because I lost all my middle-school connections. I dreamed that day\'s stories sometimes, maybe I missed it. I don\'t have courage to reach out first.
So, If I go back, I continue keeping in touch with them.
So, If I go back, I continue keeping in touch with them.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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