HW 3.24
학생이 쓴 원문
The worst punishment I can think is to live a jail alone. If human can\'t interact with others, they couldn\'t share their emotions. I think it is the worst thing as human. We are social animals. Maybe it would be cut, we will be depressed.
I think I should avoid doing bad things because I might not be able to go abroad. It\'s so terrible for me, so I\'ve got to live well.
I heard that being burned is the most painful thing. So, I think it is the worst punishment in the whole human history.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!
Man is a social being indeed. For a criminal to be alone is something they can endure. As a matter of fact, these criminals do not feel any remorse of their actions. They are cold hearted and have no sympathy.
In your case, you have to stay vigilant about bad elements of society. Learn people\'s intent quickly to avoid any untoward incidents.
Looking at your last two paragraphs, they are both correct. Very good! For the first one, ask in class if you would want to know the grammar structures.
You did a great job!
See you.
-T. Donna~
>>> The worst punishment I can think of is to live in jail alone. If a human can\'t interact with others, they couldn\'t share their emotions. I think it is the worst thing as a human. We are social animals. Maybe if it would be cut, we will be depressed.
I think I should avoid doing bad things because I might not be able to go abroad. It\'s so terrible for me, so I\'ve got to live well.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
I think I should avoid doing bad things because I might not be able to go abroad. It\'s so terrible for me, so I\'ve got to live well.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
I heard that being burned is the most painful thing. So, I think it is the worst punishment in the whole human history.
>>> Correct! Very good sentences!
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